Friday, 4 May 2018

auckland

Hi my name is Jayden and today i will tell you about my holiday in auckland


in auckland we went to the malls we went to rainbows end and we also went to the giant lego musuem. Next we went to the lake and jump off the bridge into the water. we also went to the go karts on the way to christchurch we went to hanmer springs. but best of all we went on the bumper boats and a guy acidentally popped one and it was funny to watch.
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4 comments:

  1. Anonymous6 May 2018 at 20:35

    Did you watch anyone of the warriors games while you were up there?

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  2. Anonymous8 May 2018 at 09:15

    Hi Jayden.
    It's Ben from Awahono school. I like your post. How long where you in Auckland? Next time i think that you could put capitals on the front of
    your sentences.
    Kind Regards
    Ben

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  3. Anonymous15 May 2018 at 14:01

    Hi Jayden,

    I really enjoyed your post,I especially liked the part when you jumped off the bridge into the water! Next time make sure you put capitals and punctuation in your writing- I'm working on this too (by the way)!

    Thank you for your amazing post.

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  4. Anonymous31 May 2018 at 09:26

    Hi Jayden
    It looks like you had a very fun time in Auckland. Next time try and remember your capitles.
    Max

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